1. What are the strengths of your partner’s essay? Why?
She was able to build up the tensity of the story very well, and really have you feel the emotion she felt during the experience. There were lots of desrcriptive sayings for emotions and pull you in so you want to know what happens.

2. What areas could use improvements? In other words, what suggestions can you give
your partner that will help his/her paper improve?
I cant really think of much more, there were a few sentences that needed to be changed a bit and then spelling errors but that's it.

3. What is your favorite literary device used in your partner’s essay?
She used very descriptive words to give imagaery about emotions and even the weather outside.
4. What is the part of the paper that stands out as the most "catchy" or important?
When she talks about the emotions felt upon waking up and waiting to begin the dance