"I could still remember when my brother and sister were little and I would have to take care of them all the time."
- I could clearely recall the weight on my back of caring for my younger brother and sister, seemingly unstopping when we were kids.
" It even had a pleasant baby powder smell."
- You could smell that strong baby powder smell reaking off of it to your nose.
"My friends came over, and we all piled into the car."
- When my friends came over, we all squeezed into the car like circus clowns into a little VW beetle.
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